![]() She can have a boyfriend, to a fiancee with a REASONABLE timeframe (3 to 4 months is more workable) You did at least write the start of a way to state she’s got Daddy Issues, so let the Player USE THAT. The Eldest: She SHOULD NOT be getting married in ONE MONTH! (Or there should be a way to BREAK it) With her around, that makes it a monkey wrench you don’t need in the narrative. ![]() They should be separated because he WILL fuck up. The wife – WHY is she there if they are getting divorced. The maid character why is she there except to be a wedge with the wife? I do NOT like FemDom stuff, so find a way to break the neice) ![]() ![]() (I would prefer Harem – and for it to be written as such. Since nobody here has given a real review yet, there are some narrative problems I’ll lay out.įirst: The tags do NOT say harem. ![]()
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